10.1.12

Writing Books: My Faves

If you're just starting out in your writing, you may start to wonder if (a) what you're doing is "right" and/or (b) how do the Real Deals do it?

When I first started writing "for real," I didn't really care.  I had this loose idea of how authors did it and just went with it.  I wish that I could rewind to that state of mind because I actually got stuff done back then.  I wrote in such a carefree way--it sucked...I mean, like you wouldn't believe--but I was writing, and I loved it.  Sometimes, ignorance is bliss.

Then of course I'd want to turn on my current brain to edit, because my current brain knows what it's doing.  Being in the state of mind where I'm hyper aware of my writing actions...it can suck.  Because I'm super aware of what I'm doing wrong.  It stops up my writing to where I'll go months without writing a thing.

My dad got me a book that I still use to this day.  It seems that whenever I start on a new project, I pull it out and basically re-read it.  I reference it so often that it's falling apart on me.

So my first recommendation is:


Your First Novel by Laura Whitcomb and Ann Rittenberg

(Ann Rittenberg is actually listed first on the cover, but I switched the order of their names because Laura Whitcomb goes first in the book.  Haha.)

This is my go-to book on writing.  I'm currently starting it over again and annotating and underlining.  Laura Whitcomb wrote a fantastic book called A Certain Slant of Light and it was the first young adult book that I called "my favorite".  She knows what she's doing.  She outlines techniques so well.  Me, I'm a list person, and I can still understand what she's saying.  She points out things that may seem obvious, but you realize that you might have been going at it the wrong way.

Her advice on starting, writing, and revising your book is so wonderful.

My copy of Your First Novel is, like I said, falling apart.  The film on the front cover is peeling back, there are about two dozen flags sticking out from the sides, and the spine is broken in one place where I'd creased it so many times (Characters and Exposition, chapter 4).

I've had it for years and I still say it's The One you want to check out.

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This second one is also by Laura Whitcomb!

Novel Shortcuts by Laura Whitcomb

Again, she knows what she's talking about.  Here, Ms. Whitcomb talks about the things she wishes she'd thought of when writing her first draft.  This was great for me in several places, because one of the things she suggests is mind maps for characters and main ideas.  I'm a very list/visual-oriented person.  So that really helps me out.

In Novel Shortcuts, Whitcomb goes into detail about how to tackle scenes, how to find the "moments" in your story, and what to do when you feel it all should go in the bin.

I highly recommend it, especially if you are already a fan of Your First Novel and want more of Whitcomb's advice.

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I'd first checked this book out at the library and loved it so much I bought it.

Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott

I pulled a lot of quotes from this book to hang around my desk.  Even though Ms. Lamott doesn't write in my preferred genre (I've never read any of her other books), her advice for writing in general.  Her third chapter ("Shitty First Drafts" p. 21 paperback edition) is fantastic.  I used to read it everyday before I started writing.

The overall theme of her book is to take everything "bird by bird" meaning "one at a time".  It's so easy to get overwhelmed with what you want to put in your book and how you're going to get it there and then make it work.  It's enough to scare away even a seasoned veteran.  

Ms. Lamott's easy writing style is underlined by a sadistic, almost self-deprecating sense of humor.  It makes it easier to understand where she's coming from and makes it so much more enjoyable to read, overall.  Her short chapters make it easy to use it as a "daily dose" source of inspiration.

what are some of your favorite writing books?

7.1.12

Shelving a Story

I'm sorry to have to announce that I am putting my story Phoenix Rising on the shelf until further notice.  This was a really tough decision for me, because I'd put a lot of time and effort into these characters and their world and their stories, but something went wrong.   Their voices got congested, and I could only understand every other word and no amount of decongestant medicine would work.

My critique partner made me feel a lot better about this decision because sometimes you just gotta do what you gotta do.  I'd realized that I was writing to "The Standard" of YA Paranormal Romance and I was starting to dislike my own story and writing, not in the perfectionist way, but just that gut feeling of indifference.

I had a discussion with my dad (more like I was ranting and working myself into a state and he was trying to coax the hurricane into a bottle) and he told me that (a) it's more important that I just write, no matter what the genre or story and (b) I need to write the story I would want to read.  Forget classifying my story into how it would fit on the shelf amongst the other books and focus on just writing the story I'd want to read.

Well, his name is Eli, he's eleven-years-old and nothing like anything I've ever attempted to write before.